Lauren's Annotation

Registry of Interpreters for the Deaf, Incorporated. Registry of Interpreters for the Deaf, Incorporated, 2015, https://www.rid.org/. Accessed 1 February 2018.

"The Registry of Interpreters for the Deaf is where to go when looking for information on the process to  ​of becoming an interpreter" Maybe find a way to move your quotation into the second paragraph? It seems to correspond best to a thesis statement which you can rewrite in your own words. In that case you should find another quotation to use in your second paragraph. ​"This website shows ​the process as well as providing many other resources to do just that". The first time you introduce ASL make sure you write out the full name and then abbreviate later. "Any basic information I would need on the subject, the Registry of Interpreters for the Deaf most likely has".Try not to sound wishy-washy when you say "most likely". Sound confident that your information is correct, because it is!  "they provide a lot of additional recourse  ​resources one could go to to get more information. Remember to compare this source with another source! This is certainly a helpful source and you showcase it very well. I can tell that you know what you're talking about and you make it easily digestible for the average reader. My final comment is to use at least one quote in the body of your annotation to provide some concrete information.